Thank you! It's a pleasure to be in this community with you and everyone else
God Save The King
Thank you! It's a pleasure to be in this community with you and everyone else
God Save The King
You have always supported me. My turn now. My honor and distinct pleasure…
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Happy you liked the concept!
I always envisioned food being in the kitchen, so yes. Same with the kitchens being operable.
I never really thought about if the food stays fresh, I'm just going to go ahead and state yes right now.
Funnily enough, the elevator was originally supposed to be located in halls leading to washrooms, though I ended up changing this for whatever reason, so yes.
All stuff I'd have to expand in a rewrite, thank you for asking!
God Save The King
was expecting an enormous log (cause its what everyone does and its honestly boring) but no. this is AMAZING
easy +1
I liked it even before I saw the "Liminal Echo" reference!
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Wow you have outdone yourself in this article. The way you connect Firesalt to allready established stuff like objects and groups is masterfull. The true scientific approach was a vary good idea and works the best w objects like this. Thanks you for taking hour time with it. I might like it even more than Super Almond Water.
I like how this rewrite takes a more scientific approach, and even gives firesalt a chemical compound name
If it is a facling, it would be a new type of memory facling, however, it is odd how they were described when the illusion was broken. (from the red knight Lorenzo part) "The people are writhing things, half shadow, half television static." Those don't sound like faclings; they are some other entity or property of the level. (Could the level need sustenance to sustain its illusion?)
You're not the only one who thinks that way.
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a neat rewrite with lots of great imagery. i could just imagine hanging around somewhere where you thought was safe, and glimpsing the scenery behind a cracked window slowly transform into that of a surreal landscape before your very eyes.
+1
Bro decided to give nate an aneurysm
Who wrote this lmaoooooo
(thank you so much for translating this you are awesome)
Although the rewritten version expands a lot of content, it also adds a lot of unnecessary material.
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Knowing how difficult that rewrites can be, +1 for you!
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
For what it is worth (depending on who you ask) here is my love and support for my friends and colleagues.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Wow. I thought more people would have responded to this. Apologies for being so late, but I've decided I want to take a crack at answering this.
I feel that, for me, the epitome(?) of clinical description is straightforward description that says a lot in little words. I don't mean this in the sense of simple words and short, easily-digestible sentences, I mean that it is impersonal and matter-of-fact; it does not meander; it does not fancy its descriptions, or make clunkily long sentences in layman terms. It is clear and concise, has a goal, and gets the job done.
Thanks for the critique.
Please somebody reply
This problem needs to be fixed