Level 198 - "follow me into the storm" / Discussion

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xuziqi 02 Sep 2026 12:08

note: already translated this into cn

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Re: +1

Moose0 02 Sep 2026 12:13

holy hell bro it got announced less than a minute ago

Re: +1

xuziqi 02 Sep 2026 12:46

actually i translated the page cuz I just went through the site and saw the page get posted so in fact it has nothing to do with the announcement lol

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exotichive 04 Sep 2026 00:49

i still dont rly get the artisticr easoning behind the switch to all caps — ngl, it feels more… messy(?) than impactful to me — so maybe u can enlighten me on that. i think this needed more time in the oven to be great; imo, the prose feels pretty unpolished. but that kind of defeats the point of the challenge, right? :P i still appreciate the effort nonetheless, i think this is good enough for what it is

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Re: +1

Moose0 04 Sep 2026 04:43

the lowercase is the calm and the caps is the storm. its kinda meant to feel messy because it would be pretty messy to get torn to pieces by the weather.

I mean yeah of course it needed more time in the oven but its kinda hard when the competition gives you an hour XD. the prose is definitely unpolished and was one of my insecurities when posting it, i just unfortunately didn't have the time to make this level what it deserved.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, exotichive!

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Perdudanslinconnu 04 Sep 2026 11:16

I do agree with the comment above that the article could use some polishing to be really great, especially the all caps part which imo is the weakest section of the article.

That being said, I think the article is still good and enjoyable overall, and that the final image and caption saves the ending. Well done + 1

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