Seeking Critique/GL (shocker, I know)
So, this is my first article I've ever written (although it's been in the works for like, 3 years now). I'd like to get it greenlit eventually, but I literally cannot stop making revisions. Anyways, enjoy. I worked pretty hard on this and aside from some minor SPaG maybe, I'm pretty sure I'm finished with this page. This article is pretty heavy on formality, which was intentional. It's personally my favorite way to write if I'm going to be completely honest, so let me know how it meshes with the concept. Also if you have any criticisms of the writing or structure, I'd'n't (woah) mind hearing about it, so let loose.
I'm upset it wouldn't let me use the Þ in my name