I did critique for this and I'm happy for it to finally make it to the site.
People are probably going to complain about the name and theme change, but purists will complain about any rewrite, even good ones like these.
It has good and well executed themes in my opinion. I somehow like that it is very similar in terms of structure to the orginal 2019 idea of level 13.
+1
10/10 Bazingas; would boil that frog again.
I think you just burnt them.
This article seemed like an allegory to homelessness and poverty traps in the Frontrooms……
Very nice rewrite, hyped for that "befallen Level 13" to know more.
I want to point out that in the first interview log, Melody is pointed as the "interviewee" despite being her the one doing the questions, so i guess she's actually the interviewer, not Michael.
Where is the sublevel (13.1) which caused this tragedy? The page doens't exist yet, meaning the lore makes no sense. Also, this is more of an aesthetic thing, but the dark background kinda sucks, especially when I want to see who else rated the page and that stuff. Until then, it's a downvote
