Entity 2 - "The Windows" / Discussion

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calf-0 18 May 2025 01:17

Great rewrite！

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ROBOT REVIEWS

Super-Robot14 18 May 2025 04:27

I really loved this! And I'm not usually a fan of clinical, so that's saying something. I really liked how the themes were portrayed and by God it's haunting. I really like the ending too! Also nice using the ISP :D, I think it'd be pretty awesome sauce if people use it more because I feel like humanizing the Backrooms is always peak. You did that really well, it felt viscerally human and not just like an abstract threat. Pretty darn good. +1 from me :3

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Waow

PrismaticMoose 18 May 2025 09:27

I actually did one of the earliest pieces of critique for this.
It's kinda funny to see how much the article has evolved since it's initial iteration.
anyway, I still quite like this. +1

+1 from Goerman

Robert Goerman 18 May 2025 13:52

Knowing how difficult that rewrites can be, +1 for you!

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Your friend and colleague,
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(account deleted) 18 May 2025 14:13

Although the rewritten version expands a lot of content, it also adds a lot of unnecessary material.

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1:00 am binge-read session

centurys lute 19 May 2025 06:42

a neat rewrite with lots of great imagery. i could just imagine hanging around somewhere where you thought was safe, and glimpsing the scenery behind a cracked window slowly transform into that of a surreal landscape before your very eyes.

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Peak Re-Write

DR Andrew Pie 19 Jun 2025 21:04

Great seeing another re-write of a classic by a great writer.

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