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Why did you say this would be downvoted into oblivion?
This is great.
+1 Because we need more actually good poetry.
Honestly some of the better poetry I've seen on here so far.
Really cool poetry. I like the images you made for it/used. It has this unique vibe that I got from once playing LSD Dream emulator. Every single way is different from another. We as humans chose our paths in life but they are allways influenced by someone or something.
+1
We are all so lucky to engage with talent such as this. Seriously.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
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I'm afraid it's peak, so glad I got to crit this
I'm not a fan of the poetry levels. I've seen how you do writing on other levels. Please give us something more than just a poem for this level. Prose does not do your writing justice and doesn't work for wanderer reports…
who are you to insinuate that DrAkimoto doesn't know their own writing skill and talent? you can say that you don't like his poetry, and that's fine, but saying that you've seen his writing and that he should have done more on something he's making, not you feels arrogant.
I realized halfway through that this was actually a series of haikus, not just free verse, and my brow got all scrunched with how impressed I was. The production of this could not have remotely been easy, given the massive constraints of English haikus, and as such I think it tells enough of a compelling story and gives enough unique, vivid imagery for me to really feel comfortable with a +1.
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