The physical narration is amazing don't get me wrong. But I don't really see any level aspect of this—I do see bittersweet , it does well. I hate saying "this isn't backrooms enough" because usually, that's some bullshit, but I think here is where I'd say something adjacentish? If this wasn't listed as a level, I would think this is a tale or something. Not because of the format screw, but rather the nature of the article.
There are levels that are inspired from the real world, but there's elements that show the fantastical nature of it. Or play into it in some sort of way. I didn't see as much of that here to engage me with this entry.
The actual writing is great! Good enough to not outright downvote. But I didn't feel the level aspect as much so novote (I hope this doesn't feel petty ;w;)
