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This is soo 2020 in every way but I love it. (Every sigle part of this article feels like that with made me laugh) Imagine if people were doing stuff like this back then. Life would be way better.
This page is incredible and also subtly heartbreaking. I really like how there's the obvious layer of horror that is immediately visible by the images and description but then there's a second layer of horror that's revealed as you read the page. The horror doesn't feel forced at all and manages to really compliment the more clinical tone. I also think this is an excellent use of a short story. You manage to tell us so much but also we're left with a lot of interest. Overall I like this a lot. Absolutely incredible page!
I think the tabs are what got to me the most—the rising tension was intense. "Melatonin-laced multicolored lollipops" was the first thing that stuck out to me, and each relevant blurb of information that was related to it felt like a hammer driving a nail deeper and deeper into wood. This is deserving of an up-vote, though the temporal manipulation aspects of the level have yet to feel significant to me. I'm sure I'll understand its relevance upon a rereading.
The black owl spreads its wings once more.
Did you really take these photos in your basement? /j
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
There’s something odd about this story, as if something have happened here before, could anyone make a guess?
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