Beauford made me do it
This was extremely fun to write, I hope y'all enjoy.
Huge shout out to my crit givers: BlueSignet,
XRaggiX,
Guy777,
scutoid studios,
PrismaticMoose
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I will read this article at my free time!
Gave the original page the rewrite it deserves. I like the changes made a lot. It now stands out a lot more and feels more alive.
I absolutely ADORE this rewrite! Such a fun read, this really did the original Level 24 justice. I love the expansion with the BNTG and just the overall feel of the page. The clinical tone was spot-on!
Incredible work, my dear friend. Truly incredible.
You made this level feel alive. From such a nich level to super fun and interesting read. B.N.T.G. capitalistic as allways, clical tone work here perfectly and images were on point. I didn’t feel like there should be added something else.
Keep up great work +1
I saw this a week ago in a late stage of crit, glad to see it be added to the site fully.
The level was pretty bare-bones before, I'm glad you deepened the story on some of the more interesting elements such as Beauford and the plastic mines.
+1
I don't have much to say for this one, but I enjoyed it none the less. I was introduced to the original level via a youtube video by the 2020 Backrooms youtuber Mr.Backrooms way back when (If anyone remembers that guy) and I loved the concept of it, super happy to see it properly fleshed out now. I feel like I liked the addition of the mites more than I should've and it's nice to see the B.N.T.G be expanded on.
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U.E. Menzies
THE MOOOOON
I'm always a sucker for space, and the original 24 was an intriguing concept but definitely lacking in depth.
Glad to see it be rewritten and fleshed out properly, definitely an enjoyable read.
Agreed! As a fellow space nerd myself, this was already a good read even before the rewrite. But it has definitely improved afterwards. I especially love the B.N.T.G presence as I haven't seen many pages have them as a main focus. (But then again, I haven't read too much of the wiki, so what do I know?)
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