this shit should win you the contest and if it doesn't the winners better fuckin pick it as a featured
mark my words if Nyx's team wins I am using my vote for this page wtfffff
This was phenomenal. I love your writing style and how you did the dialog. The story keept me engage till the end. The characters and setting were well used. This is the best article in our team as well as top 100 article ever on wiki no joke. You are the best new author out there
Voice acting the dialog would be cool
+1
u should do another valentin impression like dat one on crit night….. just saying ;)
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"Yellow Eternal Repository isn't real, it can't hurt you."
Yellow Eternal Repository:
eternal repissitory
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I didnt quite get everything but it was cool read. Absolutely scrumptious theme in the first page also
im not even sure if anybody would get the full idea xd
glad u still like it!
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Great worldbuilding leading to a great story, great lore use (Augur use in big 2025???), interesting characterization and very fun details I'll definitely use un the future.
Good job!
merci !! 🥖🥐
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(account deleted)I thought it was just a simple desert, until I found that there was Offset.
This is so cool.
+1
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Holy shit, I LOVED this one! From the groups interacting, to the description of the level itself, simply wonderful! I feel like similarly to Object 82, I would've liked it better if I knew more about the groups this article focuses on. But if Object 82 was a nudge to read into these groups, this was a push!
+1
U.E. Menzies
many thanks!! glad ya like it
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If there's something people know me for, it's for being insane about Ultrakill and Sisyphus from Ultrakill specifically. Local idiot kicking his legs and giggling as the mentions and alluding grew more frequent.
That aside, genuinely banger writing on display here. The blocks were a bit squished on mobile but that doesn't matter in the wake of how good this was to read. Goddamn.
glad you like it!!
you may even consider this a love letter atp <3
cheers from one UK fan to another! ;)
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