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I love the implications. Normally wouldn’t have read this but Rey made me. Nothing outstanding but not boring. Solid 6/10, upvoted.
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OMG I quite like this level with its purple pastel theme.
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A good short page. Nothing is too confusing, and I was able to get through the whole page and understand it all, although it is another hallways level, but a unique one for now. Both the clinical tone and dialogue sections are fine, although I do see one typo in the "comments on the level" section at the time of writing. I also see that there's an image mentioning a "stuffie", even though it's not mentioned elsewhere on the page. Is this an object or entity?
4/5 overall.
A nice place for a senior citizen to enjoy a nap.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
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This is probably the only article on the site that gives this very specific nostalgic childlike feeling (for me) and its sooooo refreshing to see. Its short and sweet and does an amazing job at keeping things filler free, and it's such a pleasant read for it! Plus, the theme definitely adds to the whole vibe a lot more than I thought it would.
+1, I dig this a lot!
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Congrats on your first page! The writing and themes are incredibly tight. I really liked the touch of how the level was discovered by doing something "normal." Has some interesting implications for the world :)
interesting concept, but the execution loses steam towards the reviews section.
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