Confusion and clarity sharing a few words somewhere between life and death / Discussion

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ReyDay 08 Nov 2024 19:47

This is my favorite entry so far. Just everything about it is so perfect. I was genuinely so surprised when it turned out that the reader is the character on the right. Genius. I love this concept, I love this execution, I love this page. Take my upvote, I wish I could give a million.

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HiimDoc 08 Nov 2024 19:58

Thanks a lot for your comment, glad you liked it!

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In brightest day, in blackest night, no force of evil shall escape my sight

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Are you sure you read everything?

HiimDoc 08 Nov 2024 20:06

Just asking. After all, the page itself tends to play with how we perceive it.

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In brightest day, in blackest night, no force of evil shall escape my sight

Seems I missed the snipe this time... this is what I get for not "reloading"

Spectre48 08 Nov 2024 20:13

+1 read this in draft absolute fire

Re: Seems I missed the snipe this time... this is what I get for not "reloading"

HiimDoc 08 Nov 2024 20:29

thank you sm! i didn't really know what to expect when posting since this page is not something people are used to read

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In brightest day, in blackest night, no force of evil shall escape my sight

CamaradeAlbabar 08 Nov 2024 22:46

stared at the abyss and it looked back at me +1

CamaradeAlbabar 21 Nov 2024 15:10

Corrected to a novote after some thinking and discussion. I think the main issue is that the page assumes a certain opinion from the reader, which might actually not be true. It's a bit unfortunate, since it might leave the wrong impression that you're being condescending towards your readership. Still, I appreciate the effort, and I think the core concept remains interesting.

Moral of the story

Soni_the_Honk 09 Nov 2024 19:32

Life isn't endless. We all die at some point. What use is a picture to a corpse? Our memories serve just as well, and when they don't, you don't need to remember. Live life for life itself, not for the memory. Go tell someone you love them. Go give someone a hug. Go play that game that your brother has been asking you to play with him. You might never get another chance.

Re: Moral of the story

Soni_the_Honk 23 Apr 2025 20:43

damn i thought i was philosophical. i used all my brainpower for the next 2 months when i wrote this lol

LiminalDoctor 11 Nov 2024 16:10

What prompt(s) does this use?

eh

HiimDoc 17 Nov 2024 23:47

as the page wasn't originally meant for the contest, it doesn't really stand out. However between the moment i knew i would post it for the con, and the moment it was posted, i took the time to reajust it a bit, to fit the prompts better than it originally did.

it fits with :
Tale
Loss
Author
Endings

And it can even fit with others, depending how you interpret the story

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In brightest day, in blackest night, no force of evil shall escape my sight

Nice, very meta

BlueSignet 17 Nov 2024 00:05

Overall, I enjoyed it, but I do caution you from getting overly self-indulgent. Sometimes, the meta aspect crosses the line, so you need to toe it.

Re: Nice, very meta

HiimDoc 17 Nov 2024 23:48

True, thanks for the feedback !

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In brightest day, in blackest night, no force of evil shall escape my sight

+1 from Goerman

Robert Goerman 17 Nov 2024 20:10

Not bad. Not bad at all.

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Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman

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Schulzenreich 23 Nov 2024 05:56

I like this

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pnn wepm 23 Nov 2024 12:47

Wtf the name is longer than my mind.