Entity 73 (Kirai) rewrite
Heya gang, a couple of you might remember Entity 73— the black stuff that possesses you? It had a timer on the page that'd black it out after a few minutes.
Well, I've rewritten it completely. I was very unhappy with the writing, as it felt like a bunch of random metanarrative self-indulgent "my guy is so cool!" fanfic slop.
I've changed an innumerable amount of things with both lore and characterization, as well as page format in general. All in all, I'd say its a MUCH stronger page. If you liked the original, you'll LOVE the new version. If you didn't like the original, you'll definitely have a much more positive opinion of this one.
Give it a read and comment! I read all of them :) http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/entity-73
-Spectre48