need critique for a level im still working on

Summary:

essentially a abandoned campground wher stuff decays really fast and theres a bay that is literally a entity.

need critique for a level im still working on

Bridger A Walker 10 Sep 2024 19:25

link for the draft (still being made) : [http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/bridger-a-walker]
it's my first page and I need some suggestions!

Re: need critique for a level im still working on

Error012 10 Sep 2024 20:11

• Well, to be honest, it's a bit basic. The first thing you need to know is that the Amended Class is mostly used when it is revealed that the information of a level is altered and not at the time, you can add it at the beginning, but it is highly recommended to add it in a foldable.

• The second thing you should know is that currently the vast majority of levels have a specific theme to give more relevance to the article. To use the casual theme of the site you have to have a very good point and a good concept so that people are interested in the story and not the theme that is used (which is what I mostly see in some).
  • I recommend you take a look at CutTheBirch's articles, as most of them are basic, but have a very good central point as a concept. Here are the link to the most recommended page: Draft More Interesting

• Third, there are many types of recordings, but there are two main ones: The Log and The Transmission (the latter is not used as much). I will leave you the template for each one:

[open_template.log]

[[=]]
+ >BEGIN LOG<
[[/=]]
**Time:** Day and time of the log
**Recorder:** M.E.G. Member Here
**Location:** [[[Starter Log Level Here]]]
**Other parties involved:** Entities in the log (optional)
----
**Name1:**

**Name2:**

**Name3:**

**Name4:**
----
[[=]]
+ <END LOG>
[[/=]]
Short description of the last word(s).

[open_template.transmission]

[[=]]
+ [STARTING TRANSMISSION]
[[/=]]
----
**Name1:**

**Name2:**

**Name3:**

**Name4:**
----
[[=]]
+ [FINALIZED TRANSMISSION]
[[/=]]

Last edited on 10 Sep 2024 20:35 by Error012 Show more

Re: need critique for a level im still working on

Spectre48 03 Nov 2024 00:47

Heya, you're actually in the wrong spot for draft critique. This forum is for ideas specifically, so critique on your raw concept (ideally before) you start writing a page. First impressions type stuff.

I'd suggest reposting your draft here ( http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/c-6898687/help:draft-critique )

as this is the draft critique forum. You're far more likely to get some crit on this over there.