[CRITIQUE NEEDED] Level 85

Summary:

I need critique for my idea.

[CRITIQUE NEEDED] Level 85

Dr Sventzer 21 Jul 2024 17:44

Page Type: Level

Core Concept: An level that seems like a hotel, but on each floor is a barrage of anomaly, and teleports you back to Level 0 after some kind of ritual in the fountain, but can escape by another manner (no-clipping through the door of a room) and teleports you to the level you were.

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Gotta make a move to a town that’s right for me []:

Last edited on 21 Jul 2024 22:01 by Dr Sventzer Show more

Re: [CRITIQUE NEEDED] Level 85

Spectre48 03 Nov 2024 00:50

I'm a little confused— can you give a bit more information?

So far I know

-Hotel level
-Each floor is a barrage of 'anomalies'
-Teleports you to level 0 after a ritual in "the fountain" (what is the fountain?)

Its pretty barebones right now.

Re: [CRITIQUE NEEDED] Level 85

Dr Sventzer 03 Nov 2024 08:07

A fountain in the base floor of the hotel right at the center.

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Gotta make a move to a town that’s right for me []:

Re: [CRITIQUE NEEDED] Level 85

Spectre48 04 Nov 2024 01:59

I mean, I don't really see any problems with the idea so far? I think you definitely need to boost up the content a lot though. Get more specific. There really isn't a whole lot to go off of, so it's hard to tell if the idea is one that needs tweaks or not.

I will say try to avoid writing a clone of Fandom's level "!"

The "each floor is a barrage of anomalies" line reminds me of that

Re: [CRITIQUE NEEDED] Level 85

Dr Sventzer 04 Nov 2024 12:24

What is level "!"?

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Gotta make a move to a town that’s right for me []:

Re: [CRITIQUE NEEDED] Level 85

Error012 04 Nov 2024 19:34

http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/long-forgotten-exclamation