Level 5.4 (Not Five Stars)

Summary:

I need greenlight abd criticsm.

Level 5.4 (Not Five Stars)

The_Faillen_One 04 Jul 2024 09:53

Hello! I have written a sub-level and I want to publish it. For this I need grenlight and criticism. Click here to see my article.

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Re: Level 5.4 (Not Five Stars)

BlueSignet 05 Jul 2024 17:48

You cannot use any of the images you have in your page; they are not compatible with CC by SA 3.0.

Additionally, your draft is too rough and needs some polishing, especially where grammar is involved.

In general, the idea is only "weird place" and has no narrative. We've moved beyond just describing odd places and would like to see something more to the page. This page needs to be heavily edited by you before it can be posted.

Re: Level 5.4 (Not Five Stars)

The_Faillen_One 12 Apr 2025 17:27

Thanks for your critique! I was working on improve how to write an article. I read this draft again after 5 months and i saw this trash-level's real face. Sorry for late answer.

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Re: Level 5.4 (Not Five Stars)

SunnyDKnight 31 Jul 2024 14:53

As stated below there is heavily SPaG and it is quite rough it terms of thickness and narrative. I like the concept of a hotel though. Good luck.

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BlueSignet 05 Jul 2024 17:42

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