Firstly, the introduction is a bit awkward, as in Boots' critique.
Level 131 has three known sections at the moment:
The forest
The farm
The dirt path
can be changed to
Level 131 has three known sections at the moment, given the names The Forest, The Farm, and The Dirt Path.
In The Forest…
The floor is made with not-so-high grass
- "made with" could be substituted with "consists of"
- You could specify the grass height (e.g. ankle-high or knee-high)
In the Farm…
initially 50 meters long, but eventually acquiring a bit more than 3 miles
Can be clarified using more specific language (what do "initially" and "acquiring" mean here?) . As of now it's a bit confusing to understand.
the house
The house
the house’s
the house
It's repetitive. Try replacing some instances with the word "it" or omit it entirely (e.g. "one of the house's outlets" -> "an outlet").
In Entities…
Too many sentences start with "The entity". Again, try replacing some instances with the word "it", or find ways to omit it entirely.
The "The other entities of this level are:" section need not exist, just list off the rest of the entities. (i.e. "Other entities like … … also reside on this level.")
Hope that helps!
