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USED SD BANNER
+1 though in all seriousness, neat
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
habitable is the only good SD class
other than nulevelclass of course
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
Ignorance is strength, as such war is peace?
~🌱
This was a good read! Absolutely love format screws and you pulled off the narrative super well. Truly, fantastic job.
Though I did notice a double space in this sentence "Level 6.31 is a sprawling series of white-painted corridors made of smooth, solid limestone."
The gory ending broke all the immersion for me and felt very cheap. Quite disappointed, because the rest of the page was quite interesting. But unfortunately the ending wasted the potential to me.
I don´t like the implications of the level. The decay is supposed to eat the Backrooms and everyone in them. Making this place a safe heaven removes the hopelessness the decay is supposed to create
I interpreted it as being the illusion of a safe haven that falls apart the farther you go, until you try to see too far and lose it entirely. That would explain the message not to "pierce the veil of ignorance".
Miraculously written, as of I've been reading a Shakespeare play. Yet, the ending is quite disappointing. Illogical even.
While there are some noticeable flaws (as others have pointed out), I'll still give this a +1 for improving upon the original vantablack. Well done!
