Compression Cubes
Here it is. And special thanks to Liarua for last-minute changes in terms of grammar.
Also liminal and Preator for concept crit.
Now we hope for the best and so on.
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"mooooom jimmy accidentally compressed himself with a cube" (+1)
Otherwise, you will suffer a fast and possibly painless death.
WAIT HOW WOULD WE KNOW THIS?!?!?!
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"mooooom jimmy accidentally compressed himself with a cube" (+1) by 
CharaTheArchivist, 18 Mar 2024 14:24
Re: "mooooom jimmy accidentally compressed himself with a cube" (+1)
Venomous mount: It was only a prediction. You could ask them yourself, but their already dead.
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Venomous mount , 18 Mar 2024 15:22
This article has a lot of potential, but as of now I feel that it's lacking in a lot of things.
As generic as it is, a test log might help to showcase to dangers of compression cubes.
I also think that an interview log similar to red light white light would add more significance to the lease form as well.
I'm sorry if this hurts your feelings Venomous mount , but I think a rewrite would benefit this article a lot.
But then again, my opinion probably is in the minority.
I appreciate your critic Positive123, I will take note of this and work on areas of improvement to make the article more appealing to the reader.
This article isn't great. While I like the object concept, it is certainly overpowered which would make it hard to use in stories. Additionally, I don't know if the Backrooms Robotics corporation would work with the M.E.G. considering what they tried to do to the M.E.G. in Red Light Green Light, but that's not a problem with this article.
Besides it's overpowered abilities, the page is also written poorly in the beginning. The sentences are brief and stilted, and they have a lot of grammatical errors. For example, "A sizeable to conveniently fit into the standard pant pocket."
Also, the layout was written on lined paper, and the cube's edges aren't straight. It's completely contrary to the formality of the rest of the article and just looks sloppy.
I'm probably gonna think more on this but for now it's a -1 since I didn't enjoy the page and found parts that felt sloppy and half-finished. Please consider rewriting the page to make it better.
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