Very Good, +1.
Very good writing of the level. I didn't expect the ending, a shocking discovery and me thinking they were normal children.
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I thought it was shocking and kind of cool at the end, but I feel like you could go into some more lore and expand. We got a big reveal and then the page just… ended. I feel like i want more! If you add some more at the end i'd gladly change my vote, but for now it seems far too bare.
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Thanks for the comment! It was intentional to end with a slight cliffhanger haha. I felt that going on to explain "so if you lose, this is how they turn you into a ghost, and this is exactly what the children are…" would spoil the mystery. Personally I think most pages dump so much lore that they lose the "fear of the unknown" element. Thanks for the feedback anyway!
a +1 from chara :3
(though the subheader for the theme reminded me of that damn christmas song, so screw you /lh)
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Ehh, not bad but not good. I don't really know what to say about this level. kind of needs more information.
I like the idea that you have to participate in a snowball fight for your freedom. The only thing I could complain about is how short it is, otherwise, it's a nice simple level. Nice job :)
This one really hits that sweet spot for me
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simultaneously cute and unsettling. reminds me of short weirdcore scenarios.
+1
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