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sorry I'm new to this I need to add files and tags and crap sorry
edit: If I missed anything please let me know.
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Ok with that out of the way. I'm pleased to finally have gotten a page on here and big thank you to Saminese for the image and
BlockHead42 for the wonderful critique
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Btw one of the images stopped working…
Thank you
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What he cookin up doe. (+1 by the way)
Human or faceling probably(also thanks for the +1)
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Great page and very fitting for the contest too. +1 all the way.
A simple work, +1, but that doesn't mean I rate this one high, it's just average:<
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fair, honestly I agree I'm not terribly proud of this one. I'll probably rewrite this in a year or so when I get better at writing, either way thanks for the +1
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Page generally has a decent concept. However, the description section goes all over the place instead of describing things one by one. There's also a lot of capitalization inconsistencies that make the page a bit harder to read. The article could be better but also could be worse.
Based opinion, I need to rewrite this one at some point in me life
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I wish you the best! This page has a lot of potential that is unfortunately squandered by the contest requirements.
interesting concept bogged down by 2020 nothingburger execution.
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Also a based opinion
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My favorite levels are safe-ish levels, and so I love love this one! It's a cool concept, and very creative. I love that you can see entities interacting outside, and that it changes seasons. I also just love food type levels. I see you have said that you might rewrite it- I'm sure you'll make it even more awesome. I'll look out for it! :D
I do have a couple questions however- is the food found in the kitchen or just on the counter? Does it stay freshy fried or does it grow colder until refreshing? Are the kitchens operable? And lastly, does it also include restrooms?
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Happy you liked the concept!
I always envisioned food being in the kitchen, so yes. Same with the kitchens being operable.
I never really thought about if the food stays fresh, I'm just going to go ahead and state yes right now.
Funnily enough, the elevator was originally supposed to be located in halls leading to washrooms, though I ended up changing this for whatever reason, so yes.
All stuff I'd have to expand in a rewrite, thank you for asking!
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