Critiquer Profiles: Meet the Critics!

Summary:

A short place for non-Greenlighter critiquers to introduce themselves.

Critiquer Profiles: Meet the Critics!

BlueSignet 31 Oct 2023 00:15

If you are interested in being contacted to for critique, post here! If you put your name on this list, please attempt to do a critique every 90 days. If you cannot, remove yourself from this list. In addition, it's recommended that you sign up for wikidot notifications if you haven't already here: http://notifications.wikidot.com/get.

If you have an interesting in critiquing but don't know how, please check our critique guide!

Please follow this format:

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Name:
Will Crit:
Won't Crit:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Likes:
Dislikes:
How to Contact: (Wikidot PM? Discord?)
Availability:

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This thread is just for the critiquer profiles.

DO NOT SOLICIT CRITIQUE IN THIS THREAD

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Re: Critiquer Profiles: Meet the Critics!

Recurser 08 Dec 2023 12:45

name：Bamcrey。

Will Cirt：Levels，Entities，The levels or entites content that requires time to understand，holy Levels，joke pages，Translation pages for other Chinese people。

Won't Crit：Poor translation page or Kamikaze text with only of text。

Strengths：A small amount of grammar articles or puzzle solving articles。

Weaknesses：Small phrases similar to "ty" or "nope" in English articles（I will try my best to spend time understanding what these mean）。

Likes：Translation page。

Dislekes：Poetry collection and prose。

How to Contact: Wikidot PM and Bilibili（China）。

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Dr Sventzer 20 Jul 2024 12:13

Name: Dr Sventzer, can call me Sventzer for short.
Will Crit: PoI, entities, groups, jokes, themes and objects.
Won't Crit: Pages with poorly readable content (specifically no ponctuation), pages with less than 100 characters.
Strengths: SPaG, concept critique, format, idea fleshing.
Weaknesses:Poor ponctuation, lack of storyline.
Likes: Horror, translating, and plot twists.
Dislikes: Ripoffs, if joke article; non funny pages, non-horror.
How to Contact: Wikidot PM, and Reddit (u/DestructionSpreader).
Availability: All of the time until 21:00 on French time zone.

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mMeZmErIzE 05 Nov 2024 19:38

Name: mMeZmErIzE (Necrotic Anomaly on Discord)
Will Crit: Anything not listed in "Won't crit"
Won't crit: Themes, Phenomena and stuff where SPaG barely exists.
Strengths: Levels and Tales
Weaknesses: Entities and Objects (Still happy to critique them though!)
*Likes:** Horror, History, Mythos
Dislikes: Comedy (Don't dislike it, just harder to critique), Anything using modern slang (Ski, Sig** and so on)
How to Contact: A Wikidot PM is fine, but I will respond to Discord faster.
Availability: Somewhat limited (On NZ time, and have other stuff to do)

Last edited on 05 Nov 2024 19:41 by mMeZmErIzE Show more

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AUTOMATICHROMATIC 24 Nov 2024 03:17

Name: Chroma, Ethan, or Calliope
Will Crit: anything not listed below!!
Won't Crit: anything with heavy themes of paranoia, vomit, or deep bodies of water
Strengths: Concepts, SPaG, characterization and vocabulary
Weaknesses: format
Likes: mysterious stuff, entities/levels that seem safe at first glance but aren't, tales as a whole, POI's/GOI's
Dislikes: anything in "wont crit", articles with INTENTIONALLY low effort (that aren't joke articles obviously)
How to Contact: wikidot pms only!! I do not have discord
Availability: any time after 7am PST and before 6:30pm PST (weekdays) or 7:30PM PST (weekends)

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Intern_Unpaid 27 Feb 2025 13:58

Name: Intern (intern._. on discord)
Will Crit: Levels, Entities, Phenomenon, Objects, Groups, Sublevels, etc…
Won't Crit: Tales.
Strengths: Writing things like found files, Concept Critiques.
Weaknesses: Writing like novels, somewhat SPaG.
Likes: Clinical tone, world building, interconnected articles, and articles written in different formats than standard ones.
Dislikes: Nothing much. I don't dislike Tales, I just can't write them.
How to Contact: Wikidot PM or Discord. A Discord Ping or DM will get me to reply faster.
Availability: High. I've got wayyyy too much free time on my hands. Might take a bit of time to get through an article, though.

Last edited on 27 Feb 2025 14:00 by Intern_Unpaid Show more

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JSX87 13 Nov 2023 15:07

Name: JSX87, you can call me J or Justin, whichever you prefer.
Will Crit: Levels, Entities, Objects, Phenomena, Tales,
Won't Crit: Jokes, PoIs, Groups (Stuff involving Groups is okay, though!), Poetry, Canons, Format Screws
Strengths: SPaG, moderate idea/concept critique, additional ideas
Weaknesses: In-depth idea/concept critique; certain punctuation (semicolons, colons, some uses of commas); CSS (I am still trying to figure it out myself, so this is subject to change)
Likes: "It's an average X but all f___ed up" (if done well); random ideas given form (example: Object 75); articles that would be tagged 'comedy,' 'action,' 'wholesome,' 'bittersweet,' or 'thriller'; anything with good ambience (examples: Level 37 and Level 66)
Dislikes: Existential stuff; grimdark; lack of credit (I would like to be credited, but I won't go on a crusade if you don't); overdone concepts without anything to set them apart
How to Contact: Wikidot PM (I don't have Discord.)
Availability: Variable. Generally less available on weekends and past 6 pm CST on weekdays. If you PM me, it may take a couple of days for me to respond. However, once I see your PM, I will respond as fast as I possibly can.

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ForestIsWatching 10 Mar 2024 19:49

Name: Forest
Will Crit: Anything not in "won't crit". I may also help with themes.
Won't Crit: Unsalvageable pages and lore.
Strengths: Concept, Format (and CSS to an extent).
Weaknesses: SPaG and Tone.
Likes: I like pages that explore the aspects of the Backrooms in an original manner. Likewise, anything that breaks the mould will do.
Dislikes: Lore dumps (a bit of lore is perfectly fine) and """glorious""" pages (anything that started off too ambitious but is lacking a proper execution).
How to Contact: PMs here and pings on the server will do; do not DM me unless you asked me prior/have me friended. Response time will not change from Discord to Wikidot.
Availability: As most of my critiques are going to be on the Discord, I will be a little bit less active here. Nevertheless, be patient if you want my critique.

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Please mind the Forest.

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BlueSkiesAbove 02 Nov 2024 21:26

Name: BlueSkiesAbove, but you can call me any of the words that make up my name.

Will crit: Anything that isn't mentioned in Weaknesses.

Strengths: SPaG, grammar, and the structure of descriptions.

Weaknesses: Technical things, things too deeply rooted into a canon that I don't follow, and joke pages.

Likes: Unique ideas, and things that have a good story to them.

Timezone: UK time.

How to contact: Message me, and I should see it when I check the site. Alternatively, use Discord and I should respond faster.

Availability: Thursday, Friday, Saturday, and Sunday.

Extra information: I don't use a queue, but please don't overwhelm me with requests. If you need me to do SPaG critique, I'll likely make an edited version of your page if you allow me to do so, since explaining all of the errors has become unsustainable.

Last edited on 30 Oct 2025 15:04 by BlueSkiesAbove Show more

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endless_waters 26 Nov 2024 23:31

Name: endless_waters (or just 'endless' is fine!)

Will Crit: Any kind of Level, sub-levels, entities, objects, phenomena. I will also crit art.

Won't Crit/Do: Anything canon-related, tales, GOIs, POIs, themes. Anything longer than ~5000 words. SPaG checks. Translations

Strengths: Concept and worldbuilding, and connecting ideas to existing lore. I'm also good at assessing clinical tone, and the overall structure of a story. I have background in art and graphic design, so I can give pointers on visual page design.

Weaknesses: SPaG. I'm a native English speaker but I have learning disabilities that make checking grammar hard. I will point out major errors if I see them, but I wont proofread the entire peice. Also I don't know enough CSS to give technical help.

Likes: I love the empty, the overwhealming, the melancholy, and the strange. I don't think a level page necessarily needs a plot in order to be interesting- I'm intrigued by environments in and of themselves. I'm equally interested in seeing places that are scary, calm, beautiful, sad, or mind-twisting. And I like details about what it's like to be a human being surviving/coping in those places.
I love things that incoporate existing lore and tie different stories together. Give me a super-detailed scenario informed by existing complexities!
I also love the M.E.G. I'm not adhered to any particular canon, but I love reading about M.E.G working on a daily basis, and the experiences of their operatives.

Dislikes: Objects that are too powerful and make the Backrooms too easy. Ideas involving divinities/gods. Hugely populated places.

How to contact: I'm on Wiki and Discord (more active here on Wiki!). PM me here, or DM me on Discord. (Please don't ping.) My name's the same in both places.

Avilability: I'm EST, and available to crit one piece every Thursday morning from 9am-12pm. Please reach out to me before Thursday. If no one messages me, I'll choose something waiting for crit on Discord or the Forums.

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Last edited on 26 Nov 2024 23:32 by endless_waters Show more

Re: Critiquer Profiles: Meet the Critics!

SanarusGreyda 31 May 2025 14:49

Sanarus

Will Crit: I will try to criticize everything I can.

Won't Crit: Nauseating, disturbing things.

Strengths: I know a little about 'write style' criticism. I also enjoy storylines and with background story. I have a little knowledge of CSS and HTML.

Weaknesses: Articles that are done too quickly, too short, without much thought, and without much effort in terms of style.

Likes: In-depth storytelling, CSS, multi-pagers, things that are far from cliché.

Dislikes: Shallow plots, uncreative things, internally inconsistent things, +18 things and unnecessary added romance.

How to Contact: I check the wiki every few days. At the same time, I am generally on Discord. My Discord username is 'Sanarus'. If I see a message you wrote, I will reply. If I haven't replied, I still haven't seen it.

Availability: Usually every day. But sometimes, don't be surprised if I disappear for a few weeks.

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MaskedTale41 15 Oct 2025 15:49

Name: MaskedTale41. You may call me Pen if you so wish.
Will Crit: Nearly everything except objects and phenomon. Also, things that fail to hold my attention through the read, as I will lose interest in critiquing it.
Won't Crit: Things that fail to hold my attention while reading them[if this is the case, I will reply on what I think needs to be improved], objects, phenomena, and articles with a clear lack of effort or too many SPaG errors.
Strengths: SPaG. Please note that I do not pay attention to my own errors in typing, especially now that I work mainly on mobile,
Weaknesses: Formatting, format screws, and general conceptional.
Likes: I like a well-thought out article with a unique concept. I also appreciate attention-grabbers.
Dislikes: Articles that are too long. I lose attention quickly. I am unable to sit through a bible's worth of information, even if it is a well-written article,
How to Contact: Reachable on both wikidot and discord(@Pen, I think…if not, @MaskedPenTale41 or some variant of my wikidot username…). Please ping me. I am slow to delete old dms and would prefer not to clutter them up more.
Availability: I will be available for contact around 10:00 am to 7:20 pm Mondays and Fridays on both wikidot and discord; however, I may take an hour or two to reply. The later it is past 2:15, the less likely I will get back to you until the next Monday or Friday. I am in Eastern Daylight Time. I will reserve a spot for you somewhere in my day during the week. Keep in mind that I will only respond to discord pings in the early morning(this can anytime between three in the morning to six. Depends on my sleep schedule) to the afternoon(anywhere between 2:45 to 7:20). I will do critique, again, on Mondays and Fridays like clockwork, unless I put in my Wikidot profile otherwise.

Last edited on 15 Oct 2025 16:00 by MaskedTale41 Show more

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SunnyDKnight 13 Nov 2025 02:27

Name: Riko or Sunny.
Will Crit: Anything, pretty much. I'm good at storylines and poetry.
Won't Crit: Lack of effort, put your will into it!
Strengths: Poetry, storyline
Weaknesses: SPaG
Likes: Tales!!!!
Dislikes: I don't like them to be too short or to have too much buildup.
How to Contact: Wikidot pm is iffy, but my Discord @sunnydknight is very active.
Availability: Anytime besides work or in bed. Or when I'm spending time with my family.