so, if the level if forbidden from entering, what is it doing in the site? shouldn't it be hidden somewhat?
The drone allowed them to see in it(I believe). I don't think the M.E.G. or whoever it is who uploaded it the database don't want people to enter it, it's just that the level physically prevents people from entering.
While I think using a drone to see in the level was creative, I want more details on entrances and exits in the level and just its appearance in general. I want to know why people can't enter. What is preventing them from entering the level when other creatures can? Why humans specifically? There are so many things that could have been explained that weren't.
Furthermore, who the character is who uploaded this was never explained and knowing it is connected to the Sim canon does it no justice. That just means I have to hunt down articles that may or may not give me the explanation I want(Greggita should understand per her comment on defrag). Being extremely lazy (despite being a greenlighter), I don't like that. I want answers and I wasn't given them. I don't know who the "Amber Man" is, what the "heart" is and why it doesn't affect the level, why the Blue Channel is renamed, and why Object 59 would have any connection to the writer or the level. And I'm not going to dig through links for the answers.
Such is the reason for my vote. Sorry Aether.
This isn't a simulation canon thing. The character is just a recurring guy from some of my other articles. The heart is the heart of the universe, and is linked as such. The amber man and the crystal lens just don't exist right now, I haven't written them.
I can see how it might be confusing on its own, but if you just don't want to read other articles to know what things in talking about, I can't really help you
This isn't a simulation canon thing.
Oops. Might have made that mistake since I was looking at desolations stuff at the same time I was looking at your article. I tend to be a bit scattered.
Regarding the other articles, couldn't you have found some way to have, well, explained what they are? Footnotes, just having the in-universe writer giving some off-handed note, or something else? I'd be fine even if you included a short note here summarizing them. But there's nothing. I just don't have the time with my other projects, critiquing, and school, along with just not wanting to having to take longer than I have to on getting a general background story. Even if your article isn't connected to any canon and is just a singular storyline, what I said above about links still apply. They may or may not give me the answers I want and if they don't, it's just a waste of my time that I could have spent elsewhere. Furthermore, those other links could just lead me to have more questions. And with the articles that don't exist, just mentioning them when there is no context or explanation makes it makes it even more confusing.
(This is me just giving crit as a user, not, well, official constructive crit. I just like giving reasons for why I downvote if I can/if I feel the need to.)
but why does this level can't let humans enter? Is it because of something that is really about to happen? If i can turn myself into a entity or be a alien instead of a human, can I let myself into the level?
nothing is probably something I Did, a capricious god who thinks that humans are the worst thing that exists and that they committed 41 crimes and wants to punish all of humanity even though the others have nothing to do with it
This is a Trap Level and it's Extremely Deep too like the ending hits Very Very Hard the Level number fits Perfectly for this level as the Class Habitable might have been an Error
Pretty Good level overall 8/10
basic concept remediated by distinctive prose.
+1
