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do you have a glock in your rari
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so you cant buy semi-automatic and fully automatic firearms because they are illegal, and the pistols are more restricted?
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I'm like, yeah, she's fine
Wonder when she'll be mine (yeah, baby)
She walk past, I press rewind (yeah, baby)
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what colors your buggati tho
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uh i crat this so yes it's good
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
The AK-47, officially known as the Avtomat Kalashnikova (Russian: Автомат Калашникова, lit. 'Kalashnikov's automatic [rifle]'; also known as the Kalashnikov or just AK), is a gas-operated assault rifle that is chambered for the 7.62×39mm cartridge. Developed in the Soviet Union by Russian small-arms designer Mikhail Kalashnikov, it is the originating firearm of the Kalashnikov (or "AK") family of rifles. After more than seven decades since its creation, the AK-47 model and its variants remain one of the most popular and widely used firearms in the world.
hi it is me aaron92
jesus christ this lad is a pure bred american
while i live in massachusetts (which is located in the united states) i do not own firearms and i have not used one before, neither have i seen one been used.
the only time i saw one was when i took a look at a police officer's pistol
also btw i play fps games on roblox (not arsenal or anything like that) and i know like 40 firearm models
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I do think that guns plainly growing around everywhere is potentially problematic for a lot of consistency but, eh, no canon policy [multiple explosions occur]
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The M4 carbine (officially Carbine, Caliber 5.56 mm, M4) is a 5.56×45mm NATO, gas-operated,[b] magazine-fed carbine developed in the United States during the 1980s. It is a shortened version of the M16A2 assault rifle.
The M4 is extensively used by the United States Armed Forces, with decisions to largely replace the M16 rifle in United States Army (starting 2010) and United States Marine Corps (USMC) (starting 2016) combat units as the primary infantry weapon[9][10] and service rifle. The M4 has been adopted by over 60 countries worldwide,[11] and has been described as "one of the defining firearms of the 21st century".[12]
Since its adoption in 1994,[11] the M4 has undergone over 90 modifications to improve the weapon's ergonomics and modularity, including: the M4A1, which strengthened the barrel and removed the burst-fire option; the SOPMOD, an accessory kit containing optical attachments; and the underbarrel M203 grenade launcher.
In April 2022, the U.S. Army selected the SIG MCX Spear, designated the XM7, as the winner of the Next Generation Squad Weapon Program to replace the M16/M4.
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I fucking hate America.
This is far from my taste in any way shape or form. I don't like guns and don't think it vibes with the backrooms unless you really do something crazy (ig you kinda did). I'm more for slightly narrative-focused stuff as opposed to biological descriptions. I prefer it when articles have a sense of character to them and this kinda just feels like a gun with plant/parasite stuff (that might be cool for some people but not for me in the slightest.) And it didn't completely keep my personal interest in any way. Despite that, I'm willing to leave an updoot here since I'm fully ready to acknowledge that this is a well-written article. It is very descriptive and really does what it is trying to do. Every idea laid out here is well expanded upon in a way where I get the full picture of what this thing is and how to handle it. This was about the best an article of this nature can be done in The Backrooms and there is certainly a place for it. Just because I don't like it doesn't mean I think it's bad.
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I’m going to answer that with a sharp no. The joke was poking fun at the fact that America has a major gun problem. I will leave it at that and politely ask people not to reply to this message.
not to be political, but [philosophical question firmly grounded in modern politics]
what
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ok guys lets ignore
hi it is me aaron92
I don’t like guns
I hate America
We are here to write articles, not rant about politics.
I didn’t read through all of it, however it succeeded in remaining interesting.
Right you said you wanted to improve so don't expect me to go easy on you >:) *cracks knuckles*
The entity, in its natural state, remains motionless, its stems attached to the ground until being uprooted by a person or entity. It sucks nutrients from the ground and extends its roots rather deep for a plant of its size. This is because it requires a large amount of iron to live and maintain its outer shell — due to its complacent nature (???), if it remains untouched for a long period of time (approximately 2 weeks), it will begin to rot and wilt. This requirement for iron, as well as among other factors at play, have caused them to evolve into parasites that feed off of human blood for a short time (???) until their needs have been satisfied.
I don't know what you're trying to say by "complacent", but it definitely ain't the right word there bub. Also, not very sure what you mean by "for a short time".
Additionally, Organiguns are ~~additionally~~ able to produce a substance capable of ~~severely heightening~~ dramatically accelerating the production of red blood cells in one's body. This substance is administered once they latch onto their host, and is harmless aside from light fatigue ~~should~~ as long as one ~~have~~ has a healthy heart, due to the entity sIphoning most of these extra cells into itself.
"Severely" and "heightening" don't go together. "Severely" usually carries a negative connotation, usually used for explicitly harmful things (e.g. severely wounded, severely damaged). The word "heightening" doesn't work either imo… I'd use it for singular objects with a nuance closer to "intensify" (e.g heightened fear, heightened awareness) and not for an increase in speed or increase in quantity of many objects. When searching for synonyms, be sure to double check their meaning! Don't just blindly dump them into the text, or errors like this may occur more frequently.
Also you misspelt siphon lol
When tampered with, Organiguns have a propensity ~~to~~ for feasting on human blood, ~~when tampered with~~ in exchange for their use ~~being used~~ as a firearm.
I absolutely despise the use of the word "being" in a lot of places. Most times you can do without it, and the sentence will just sound better.
The main anomaly concerning this behaviour is how the entity produces the resources necessary to fire The entity's ability to produce the incendiary component of ammunition on its own is considered extranormal; after extensive research, it has been determined that the guns fire using firesalt rather than the more popular Frontrooms explosive, gunpowder.
This is really confusing. Later you state that the iron siphoned from the blood is used for ammunition? So you're trying to say something like "However, we don't know where the explosive part of the bullet comes from"?? But you haven't even stated clearly yet at this point that the guns suck blood to make bullets????
I also really dislike the sentence construction here. "Main anomaly" just sounds wrong. The phrase "is how" usually sounds REALLY awkward when used in any way besides a curt "This/that/here is how…". And that's not exactly formal either. This is only compounded by your choice to slot an additional clause ("concerning this behaviour") right in-between. In general, you seem to be using the passive form here; switch to the active form and a lot of these problems go away. Don't overcomplicate things!
Final nitpick — I prefer extranormal to anomalous. I know the SCP doesn't own the word anomalous but the association can be quite strong and it's nice to have a word for the weirdness that our wiki can call its own.
Likely more extensive than what was necessary due to the anomaly's insignificant nature.
Why does this footnote exist? The detail is insignificant. It is completely unnecessary, just like what it describes.
The entity can then be stored away safely; it is recommended to put the entity in a box or case, safely separating it from one's skin.
Mmm this is the fourth time you're using a semicolon in the article. It's not wrong and maybe it's a personal stylistic choice, but it can mess with reading pace. I'd limit use of it if I were you.
which, when planted or being actively use, …
I think you know what's wrong here
Organiguns take the appearance of a variety of standard guns that can typically be typically found in the Frontrooms, with the exception of its roots, which, when planted or being actively use, extend from the grip of the gun. The roots are barely noticeable when latched onto the ground; however, when pulled, they reach around the entirety of one's hand and forearm, only allowing the palm of the handle to be seen.
Semicolon number five. Also, what do the roots look like? What color are they and stuff?
Upon contacting the skin, the roots feel abnormally paradoxically frigid for a few seconds
The word paradox is usually used to describe apparent contradictions in abstract concepts. I don't think it fits very well in describing physical sensations.
illiciting varied reactions from hosts
Eliciting. "Illicit" is a different word; it means illegal. "Illiciting" isn't a word as far as I know.
though less conventional models have rarely been sparsely documented. The way the entity is able to take on such a bizarre form due is thanks to the environment that it appears in; Organiguns use mineral and metal deposits underground to form their signature metal carapace.
Semicolon number six. Also, another MAJOR pet peeve… "sparsely" documented. I'm not sure it's technically wrong, but the word "rarely" or "hardly" always fits better imo. I'd use sparsely in a more spatial sense, like "sparsely populated". The word "sparse" is closer in nuance to "scattered" and suggests a low density, not just numerical rarity. And "is thanks to" is WAY too informal.
Encounters with such faulty specimens a dilemma have been uncommon extremely rare and poorly documented; however, it is still wanderers are recommended to ~~feel around~~ use their fingers to thoroughly check the texture of the entity, to sense any discrepancies ~~from its almost identical texture to~~ between it and a standard firearm.
Semi-colon seven. Quite an addiction you have. Another wrong word. A dilemma is a difficult CHOICE between several options, not just any problem that is difficult to solve.
Also, I HATE — and I cannot stress this enough — ABSOLUTELY HATE the turn of phrase "it is recommended". To whom is it recommended? To wanderers? Why not then just state "Wanderers are recommended to" rather than "It is recommended for wanderers to"? Active form is almost always SUPERIOR to passive form.
These seeds only become active when bullets begin to be are formed, as the seeds are implanted into the bullets.
In terms of actual reproduction, Organiguns have a rather simple method The actual reproductive process of Organiguns is quite simple. When the entity is shot, the bullet itself will sprout into a resilient seed, able to break through almost any surface (aside from metals and such, of course) to root itself into soil. It is not uncommon to find this variant of Organiguns Such Organigun variants are not uncommon in levels with completely paved floors, such as Level 1.
"It is not uncommon" suffers same issue as "it is recommended", though it's a tad less annoying.
- Separate Avoid inadvertent skin contact with the entity by storing it in using a box or case.
I like this concept a lot. I'm absolutely gonna be using this.
Not a bad article, but you could really work on your flow and organization of ideas. For example, under behavior:
Organiguns are additionally able to produce a substance capable of severely heightening the production of red blood cells in one's body… (1)
comes before:
Organiguns have a propensity to feast on human blood when tampered with in exchange for being used as a firearm… (2)
Apart from the fact that the paragraphs themselves could be worded better, doesn't it make more sense to state (2) before (1)? Like, first, mention that when uprooted, they latch onto a human host. Then, mention that they feast on human blood while being used as a firearm (2). Then mention HOW they manage this without killing their host (1).
If your writing were compared to swordplay, I'd say that you've got a good sword (concept) and more than decent form in your sword strokes (SPaG)… but you're running around and slashing all over the place! Sure, you'll get the job done, but it's very inefficient. You wanna PLAN your strikes, and make every strike and stab count. Essentially, make every move intentional in achieving the message you're conveying — and NOT just artful in style and execution!
You also tend to misstep when it comes to the PRECISE meaning of words. Are you googling synonyms? Sometimes you use words that are CLOSE in meaning to what you want, but not PRECISE in nuance. E.g. sparsely documented, severely heightening, etc. Always double check the EXACT meaning and usage of a synonym when in doubt.
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