Thank you everyone!
my draft was became a level!.
thank you everyone and enjoy the level.
if there is any mistake or something have to know, please tell!
And don't forget to find and read the restatic's hidden log!
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Well, I really liked the level. Have you ever made other pages on the wiki? I would be really interested in reading them.
This is my first article!
But i'm ready to make more level.
So, please cheer for me!
this was actually better than i expected. however, some parts of the monologue do feel a bit unnatural. also i have no idea how the name fits the level itself.
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making name was quite hard but i'm so glad to hear the first crit on wiki!
the name fits because restatic isn’t actually hurting people, the level is hurting people to protect them: aka overprotection!
hope that helps, i actually thought the title was very smart.
as for the monologue, they unfortunately do feel a bit forced, but you never know! it could be purposeful
i still remember when i edit draft with you!
Thank you very much, blue!
(account deleted)congrats on your first article aster!
I have very high karma and I have been here for a year. my first article did not do very well, but you, a lower karma user, have gotten a rating higher than mine.
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hi it is me aaron92
thank you very much Aaron!
i was afraid of down votes or delete, but it's not now.
words like this give me hope!
This level is insanely good for being your first one.
I'm so glad to get upvote and praise from you!
thank you to read :D
I really liked your level! The concept is amazing and the level’s name fits it so well. I was wondering why it was called like that, and then it all made sense. This level really hooked me to keep reading it. :)
There are, however, several spelling mistakes. I assume English isn’t your first language and that’s why these typos exist, but even then, for the most part, your English was great!
Yeah, you are accurate!
English is not my nation language but i'm so happy you enjoy my level!
I thought that I had already upvoted this.
I thought wrong and I apologize! Sorry…
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WOW! Robert! Thank you very much!
I'm really happy to get upvote from you!
This means level 890 is an well-done level, haha
interesting concept, but the pacing could be better executed.
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