unfortunately, much of the content on this page is persistently edgy and devoid of any substance. i like the creative visuals of the featureless faces in the sky, (although from that far away, how would they even recognize the things as faces and not just weirdly shaped blobs given the lack of features?), but the rest of the gore is so painfully generic that it evokes no fear or revulsion. it would help if you went into more details such as:
They are apparently edible, though Damien likened their taste to the smell of the mass of flesh melted together by the radio signals of the pillars.
this is perfect; i wish there were more snippets like this instead of "[insert aspect of the level] was so filled with incomprehensible horrors that the main character cannot even begin to describe it. in fact, he forgor. (a trope that works well as a zinger and not, the ending line to every other paragraph)."
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