Woodrooms
i want 2 try and use the 4ums more often i don't talk about the articles i enjoy enough
splendid work on this !! i love how much adding One Extra Aspect 2 the woodrooms elevated it from a standard classic liminal space 2 a veritable iceberg of intrigue, without sacrificing any of what ppl generally like about the classic liminal spaces !! the gears, while certainly dangerous and in implication of some degree of motion, aren't designed with humans in mind—so it still feels as alien as the original, if not more. oh it's so good
about my only qualm with this page is a purely theme-based one: that being the footnote hover box is transparent, which makes the footnote text a little hard 2 read. should b a relatively simple fix if u deem it important !!
oh you I didn't even consider that! Unfortunately I'm not sure how to fix that, or who to ask about fixing it lol, but yeah that I genuinely didn't consider oops. I may see about getting it rectified
Eyy.. i just typed a loada garrbagge
ooh actually i think i might have found a fix !! the black border is a little janky theres some kind of padding goin on there buuuut try adding
.footnote{ background: rgb(var(—white-monochrome)); }
in2 a css module !! >B] ill mayb ask viv about rectifying that on the theme page later if i think of it
sorry i couldnt get my concept crit in on time :( i was gonna try to do it today but you ended up posting it.
anyways, this probably is one of the best liminal space levels. as beach said, there wasnt any element of a liminal space sacrificed, but it was still made interesting because of what lies behind the vents and stuff. mystery at its finest
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Solid!
I wasn’t sure if the woodrooms was gonna be forgotten, or just in rewrite. Otherwise, made the concept significantly better.
Greggita Mahayfaio,
Wish that I had more time here.
+1 from Goerman!
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
Simple but incredibly effective! This is such an excellent, concise read with good use of horror and intrigue. Well done!
Shiiiit. In the start, you firmly grasped my attention and kept it going until the description past the vents. Afterwards, the page became less vivid and some of the vocab used didn't reach my ears. I find that the writing style strangely dips into a different style than it was at the start, which isn't the best thing to happen. I was definitely going to +1 this until then, but sadly, I was disappointed. Overall a decent page, though, so keep up the good work, Boring.
