Level 484.1 - "The White Room" / Discussion

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aster_argyle 25 Mar 2023 08:02

you are good at making the level of storytelling

i like this level :D

good rewrite

(account deleted) 25 Mar 2023 11:59

+1

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hi it is me aaron92

+1 from Goerman

Robert Goerman 25 Mar 2023 14:10

Dr Bierre,

You have fallen victim to a Phenomenon that I have only named, but not yet created, waiting for the sands of time to announce a contest.

It is called Liminal Echo.

It waits patiently for birth.

+1 for you! I will wait here, where the "shadows run from themselves."

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Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman

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IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNN THE WHITE ROOM

Spectre48 14 Nov 2023 22:45

WITH BLACK CURTAINS
BY THE STATION

JSX87 19 Dec 2023 16:15

I like it.

+1

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"By excluding the human factor, aren't we risking the kind of personal detachment from a history that may, heaven forbid, lead us to one day repeat it? And in the end, isn't the human factor the only true difference between us and the enemy we now refer to as 'the living dead'?" -Max Brooks, from World War Z: An Oral History of the Zombie War, written by Max Brooks

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Nimortal 31 Jan 2024 16:36

Nice writing but that "Thanks for everything" at the last is a bit dark :/

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-The infamous radioactive piece of bread.

booooo another tale trying to be a level.

Yoink_Fricc06 29 Mar 2024 12:45

This isn't a sublevel, this is just a tale of the parent level that, if I'm not mistaken, uses the same image as well. These types of articles have to stop. At least the writing is good, I just wish it wasn't trying to be something it really truly isn't. It's also a possibility I'm not understanding the "true meaning" in the writing and I have it all wrong so if I do feel free to tell me and i'll consider changing my vote.
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