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Eyy.. i just typed a loada garrbagge
Love to see it. That last collapsible very much works as that final "something" I was seeking for so much in this page. Neat page rose, hope you are feeling better lately.
Also, sublevel gang, sublevel gang! Let's go.
Thanks, after you gave some feedback when this was a draft, I thought about expanding on it. Just for fun.
(account deleted)Question, what if the skeletons were some kind of entities? I thought it be more spooky
Honestly, I considered something similar, though I meant for there to be no other entities. It puts more emphasis on the cold itself as-oppose to there being something else to contend with.
No clue why I haven't left a comment on this one. It's one of my favorite levels to have ever been in the grasp of this specific creative writing site. The setting is set beautifully with the use of the first person, which creates mystery that gives it an EXTREME backroomsy and liminal feel. The strange havens and Rochester Blues disease contribute to this further. Absolutely beautiful, if I acquire the writing style of any author it would be you.
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