+1 More nature rooms
The Font was pleasing to my eyes.
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Hi there! As the Lux Shroom image was not CC-Compliant, the image was replaced with the following:
Mushroom Image by Matthew Schwartz on Unsplash, licensed under the Unsplash License
(Yes Staff Team I know I'm not meant to be doing work rn but shhhhhh it's fixed now)
Hey Bun,
Thanks for pointing that out and replacing the image. I hadn't even realized it was AI generated (though in hindsight it was a little obvious), and thanks for the new one, it looks great :)
- The Queen of Aragon
This ugly typography… What are you thinking about? Why add a horizontal line?
why？
Integrity and prestige, corruption hurts the hearts and minds of the people.
Hello Playing, thank you for the question,
There are three primary reasons behind why I have added the horizontal lines.
- The first is to help emphasis the change in topic. While I have also bolded and enlarged the titles for each section to help distinguish them, the inclusion of the lines underneath help make it just that bit clearer.
- The second reason is because it helps make the page look much cleaner and organized. Without them, the large blocks of text can start to meld together and become slightly overwhelming.
- The third reason, is just because I like how they look, simple as that.
I'm sorry that the inclusion of these lines has negatively impacted your reading experience — judging by the -1 — but I do hope that you still enjoyed the contents of this page, regardless of the lines.
Best of wishes.
- The Queen of Aragon
However, I prefer the content of your article. Your article is well written.
Integrity and prestige, corruption hurts the hearts and minds of the people.
Level 374 is a simple read, but neat nonetheless. I especially liked the liminality vive, that despite being one more plant-abundant level, still doesn't feel like it, and mostly reads as if it was an entry of its own.
I very much welcome this level to the lore. +1 From me.
Also, ignore what Playing said. Staff suspects them to have been maliciously downvoting recent pages and giving random reasons in the span of ~2 minutes between each comment, and is having a closer look at their behaviour. Among the recent entries was your page too, unfortunately.
I think the format is perfectly fine and the horizontal lines makes everything overall tidier, so don't worry about it. I agree with you.
I really liked the article; it was an interesting read.
However, I don't think it was necessary to talk about pipes for an entire paragraph when it could have been shortened to 1-2 sentences. I would have been more interested in where those doors, which are clearly not blue or red, lead—to just a new set of maintenance tunnels?
But the rest I enjoyed. Have my +1.
Overall, this is a solid start. However, the page spends a disproportionate amount of time covering the pipes in the maintenance tunnel, while hardly any time is allocated to touching on the Lux-Shrooms introduced later in the article. What also leaves me confused is how these three concepts connect on a thematic level; currently, you have a plantrooms level with a mechanical boiler hazard, an addictive parasitic flower, and a commercially available glow-in-the-dark mushroom. It's a fun array of ideas, but it makes for an unfocused reading experience because none of these elements interact in any tangible way.
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