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i did a thing. enjoy!!!1!!
I exist for the sole purpose of writing this
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I read a thing. I enjoyed!
Been on hiatus due to covid-19 this last week or so.
+1 for you.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
(account deleted)"Let's get to it! Ooh, I like this one!" (the first line that played when I opened the page)
To be honest, I was listening to music, so when I pressed the audio that played the clock ticking, the effect you intended was messed up and was interrupting my music. I just paused it via the audio and music controll(oh yeah you tried to make it to where it couldn't be paused but I still managed to do it lmao) on my school's cromebook.
A thing that interests me is the fact that some things are colored a light blue, such as the discuss page, meet the staff, greenlight page, and the forums page link. Is there a reason for this?
+1
I believe that that is just a quirk with this theme. That means its a visited link. I can try and fix it, but it isn't something I can fix at the press of a button.
I exist for the sole purpose of writing this
You're right. Don't worry about fixing it, it doesn't matter.
smh you shoulda asked me about it
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
Personally I may not be a fan of long pages, but this struggled to keep my attention and interest. Especially when all the names and characters are introduced, it's lots of dense paragraphs. The Clock at least was an interesting element and the ambiance is cool.
I'm slightly confused; why not make this a tale? It's long and narrative based, and the Level format works against it. Just my opinion.
This is probably my favorite of all the pages you've written!
What if the skeleton man in the painting is the one behind it all? (the clock and everything)
Well,the plot is quite classic,but great writing! As a translator, I found myself can hardly just view the code, so I just turned on the broswer and watch the original page. That's really a fascinating story! And I think the Chinese reader will think that too. But I have to apologize for the foreign words I picked up with, you know, I'm not a native speaker…so,Sorry.
The brain is wider than the sky
i enjoyed the story, but the clinical parts dragged on, and some of rita's reactions felt unnaturally subdued for what was happening.
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