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Snipe (Loved critting this so ye)
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Loved reading this! the tag "bittersweet" DEFINITELY fits this level's writing!
(Also.. if you don't mind, I edited the "almond water" link on this page. it used to go to nowhere. so I edited it so it redirects you to the almond water page. sorry if I shouldn't have done that.)
remember comrade, one day i'll conquer the world!
Thanks! And thanks for changing that link, I hadn't realised it didn't work…
No problem!! ^^ Sometimes we mislook things and that's completly fine! So no worries.
remember comrade, one day i'll conquer the world!
Loved it.
Felt like it could have gone on longer. Could have described more of the town, streets, iconic locations and memories… sights, sounds, smells, sensations. More imagery in the writing could have created a more vivid and powerful picture.
Nonetheless the tone was effective and packed a punch in carrying across the sense of nostalgia and loss. I'd definitely call this an example of a format-screw done right.
what if u arent wearing pockets?
(where does the scrip go?)
I exist for the sole purpose of writing this
My immediate reaction is to say "Everyone is wearing pockets, they're just not always on the outside…" But that does seem a touch more creepy than warranted. I'd say it shows up in your bag - it's unlikely any wanderer is in the backrooms with no pockets and no bag.
I thought it was a badly written article until I realized this was a great damn… fuck i forgor the name for it
FORMULA BREAKER? fORMAT BREAKER???? HELp
Anyways, I wish it had been a bit longer. Very good stuff. I liked the detail of the little scrip - does it hold any special meaning?
- Mal0gen, the skullgen in your phone.
format screw
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
This level is very liminal and unsettling to me. I love the bittersweet, eerieness, and the emptiness, definitely one of my favorites. +1
- Univ
a quiet level with beautiful and uncomplicated prose. it does exactly what it sets out to achieve.
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