The prose is vivid, and the narration seamlessly transports you into a world of boiling dangers. The page feels alive in a sense, which is fitting considering how reactive 41 is. Now, let me take a moment to highlight some of my favorite lines:
The depth of the tar itself is remarkably shallow, which allows for the geography of hot, charcoal coloured sands to periodically pierce through the surface of the tar and form small, patchy islands in various, spread out clusters.
How did you think of this? It's so dream-like, with a surreality I'd love to see in more Backrooms levels. And also:
Traversal across Level 41 is incredibly difficult, and individuals who survive its boiling tar and intoxicating fumes will usually exit the level with burn marks, cuts, or charred soles of their shoes.
Mhm, yes. Suffering.
If I had any nitpicks, it'll be that this has some definite weak points outside of the way the words flow. The "groups tried to go in that place and all died" trope is done better in other levels. Anyways, this page is Lute-approved.
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