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Amberlon.
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Level 104 - "The Edge of the World" / Discussion
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i really love this, good job. +1.
You promised you'd take me there again some day… but you never did.
(account deleted)The Son of Man,
Held my interest. An easy +1. Several paths to take for anyone wanting to add to the lore.
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Thank you for the comment. Since this is a collaborative writing website, it is always nice to hear that people see a way to expand upon your ideas.
this page is just really captivating. need i say more?
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I love the unique idea of a swampy level with a terrifying disease and a castle. I also love the mystery surrounding the "edge of the world" thing. The concepts are very creative and well fleshed out. Very thought-provoking in my opinion. +1
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the prose is concise, although i don't quite understand the connection between the philosophy of seeking the edge of the world, the green crystal, and the ant knights. as of now, the page feels like an amalgamation of three unrelated ideas.
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