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Hey hey hey just a free post, why don't I?
I actually put a lotta work into this and I think it went pretty well! Lemme know if I should fix smth.
This is kind of an allegory for alcohol and drugs of types. They can be very beneficial, but too much is a bad thing. It also plays around with the sketchy vibe of the BNTG.
Enjoy!
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Honestly, I like B.N.T.G.-related pages, such as the frequently mentioned Level 194, and this page hits all of the spots for me. Nice execution, and a generally good concept too. Good job Lemon, very cool.
Thanks rat! I rlly tried to test a different theme with this one, and it worked out wonderfully.
just don't eat too much agrugua, k?
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Upon changes and additions to this page, I have switched my vote to a downvote.
I like a lot about this article, it's done quite well. I just have a minor gripe about flow which keeps me from an upvote. Most of your sentences are just sort of period, period, period, maybe with like a few commas here and there. If you dispersed the writing into more forms and improved the flow this would be an easy +1 for me. Lmk on discord if you end up doing that and I will change my vote.
Kind of short, feels like a resurgence of the old Almond Water to some extent. The execution is pretty nice, though the mundaneness of the description and the lack of sentence variety kind of holds it back. It’s not exactly bad, but I don’t feel really captivated as of yet. Perhaps a different writing style might do it, but for now, I’m leaving this as a no-vote.
Whoa, it’s a forum signature. Ain’t that cool?
I’m waking up to ash and dust
I wipe my brow and I sweat my rust
Thank you guys for your crit!
I am sort of unsure how exactly to fix these flow issues, but I tried to improve them.
I bent a few sentences together to relate sentences to one another.
My only issue is that much of the article is written to be a promotional ad for Agrugua, not a M.E.G. description. This means that I used lists, such as recipes. I will not be fixing those, unfortunately. In large paragraphs, however, I attempted to improve.
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Good execution but the concept is a bit too similar to the bntg candies.
This must be rewarded.
What can I give you as a reward?
How about a +!?
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
that's a great reward, imo
In this day in history, somebody noticed that the BNTG is alive.
~🌱
Wait….the BNTG are real?!
I'm justice!…What?…No not the blind folded girl!
Lemon why are you sacrificing fellow lemons for a smoothie?
I'm justice!…What?…No not the blind folded girl!
Cannibalism is key.
Also thanks to all of you for the support! I have not read BNTG candies, so I am unaware of any similarities.
DONT EAT TOO MUCH and remember to updoot
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It’s basically just drugs
I'm justice!…What?…No not the blind folded girl!
