+1 haha sniped
Great article! Really glad to see this finally out. Enjoyed doing the crit(s) as well. This article took a while to come out, but I'm very glad it finally did.
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Finally!
A restroom!
At my age, one should not venture too far from restrooms.
And…there are restrooms without mirrors! The whole mirror thing is different since Level 365. Especially mirrors with reflections that act independently.
This article was a pleasant read. Thank you.
Your friend and colleague,
Goerman
http://backrooms-wiki.wikidot.com/goerman
no problemo
I liked the first part of the level but the entity section is so goofy .More like a joke level for me.
You said no vote but you downvoted it?
Also, I disagree a bit. The entities section may have some wacky concepts, but it is contrasted very well with the technical writing.
Along with that, the concepts have some horrifying implications. Sure it's pizza, but it makes sense with the level's theme.
Oops,sorry I accidentally click the downvote botton
I enjoyed the level part of it and it was enjoyable, but those entities scare me alot for some reason (in a good way). +1
ay! I'd like to inform you that this page suffers from major conceptual issues actually, there are some parts in which you introduce something, but you've barely explained it deep enough for it to have a purpose in the article. an example of this is the security cameras, which were just slapped in between without extra information :sob:
this page also suffers from rapidly switching focus, this is noticeable especially in the part where you explain about the looping around the hallways
hoping for this article to receive a rewrite though! there is potential if done right!
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