+1 I love it
Bro we finally have an entity-53 proper entry because although the last one was cool it was just like
bro we know what you look like, we know you exist
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Oh hey, a new 53. Where’d the old one go, tho?
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i think its purged, but maybe the wikidot staff still have an archive of it
also wassup
Heyy.
I’ll look for if I can see one.
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(account deleted)Good article. It pulled off it's low word count really well!
Does this entity actually set up traps? (Like supplies?)
Uh, the entity is basically lucky and a good finding all of those supplies and setting them up as traps
(Or it could be from it getting the supplies from level 176)
An article for the crawlspace creature. While I kinda liked it being on entity 54 this is certainly much better and fits the level much better then that entity did. The fuckin twist at the end and the overall vibe of this makes it a high +1 for me. The build up for the sub article before this one, by itself is fine but is a amazing companion piece to this. Overall gives the insulation a real threat and fear to it.
There is a big contrat between this article´s and The Insulation´s writing quality. While this article makes you keep reading and has a lot of unexpected surprises. The Insulation is an article that doesn´t deserve to be an enigmatic level because it doesn´t have anything special that article is begging for a re-write. if you are the author of these 2 articles please re-write The Insulation please.
I did not write The Insulation, and unfortunately it cannot be rewritten unless it drops to a rating of -5, as the original author is no longer reachable.
wish there was a image of the entity for the ending, shows how the ending is going to look like
interesting concept, underdeveloped execution.
-1
I love the narrative sprinkled in with the actual documentation. The realization that the creature has tricked the protagonist is well executed!
+1
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