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i think i saw this in sandbox-links its out now yes
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Yay!! Ty for looking at it in its early stages!
it really has grown from the previous edition i love the new ideasin it
This is that good shit- especially the field stage. Classic backrooms vibes, updoot from me. Would love to see more with this in some way…
In my opinion, the concept here was pretty well done; it was an interesting read. However, one issue I had with this article was that the grammar, tone, and sentencing could've been improved. The current alternation between formal and informal1 writing doesn't necessarily suit with the atmosphere that this level gives off. Personally, if it were to be more congruous then I would've changed this to a definite upvote. But, this is an objective mistake that requires skill to avoid. Next time when you write a new page, be sure to stay consistent and I'll give you the upvote!
Footnotes
1. Formal - A style of writing that expresses little emotion but contains a lot of specific information. Informal - A style of writing that is considered to be more personal; a vivid and emotional tone, but generally containing less information.
The level is very interesting and has a lot of charm to it, but the grammar does need work and a rewrite would definitely benefit this level a lot. +1
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It's fine, but the corruptions and cult imagery are just too stereotypical for me to be able to enjoy it. It would be better without all the exposition surrounding the False God, but even then, it's just cheesy.
this is good. it reminds me of 999 thoug
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I really love the whole vibe of the level and the concept as well. Its definitely something i've seen very little of on the wiki and I think you executed it pretty well here. Although the whole thing with the cult and the worshiping might be a little "typical" for lack of a better word on levels like this I still think it works being that there's an entire deity on this level.
All in all good job! Please keep writing.💜
interesting concept, dull execution.
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