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A Bird That Unshits Itself.
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maybe the bird the unshits itself were the friends we made along the way
-1, I’m too lazy to explain again so I’ll just copy and paste my reason from the disc. Think this page has some potential, but in it’s current state I think it’s underbaked and undeveloped.
This page hinges too much on the shock value and fails to do anything with the hook it creates. Things like this *have* been done in the past (not to this degree of absurdness, of course), but I feel like what elevates those pages into something that’s enjoyable to read is that there’s something beyond the base hook. There is a complete lack of that here. They’re ducks that poop in reverse, there’s nothing beyond that. If this is going to be a main site page then do something interesting with the concept, the oddness of the concept wears off half way through reading and just gets kind of boring after we’re introduced to it.
A Bird That Unshits Itself.
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Also Dave sounds like he can turn water into weed
- random bitch on wikidot
I had a stroke trying to wrap my head around such an anomaly that this person created
I have no words left.
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