Seeking Greenlight : Level 763

Summary:

A zoo like level containing various common backrooms entities

Seeking Greenlight : Level 763

A_Weeb_Named_Lighty 28 Feb 2022 15:13

http://backrooms-sandbox-2.wikidot.com/A_Weeb_Named_Lighty

Re: Seeking Greenlight : Level 763

NavyEOD_24 28 Feb 2022 15:20

It feels… basic? Almost incomplete. There are SPaG and flow errors in the article in some places, no use of CSS or SD's (CSS is mainly stylish, but still a nice touch sometimes), and it isn't really fulfilling. I say expand it more and run it by someone who's good with grammar and flow.

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Re: Seeking Greenlight : Level 763

YourWeirdPlant 28 Feb 2022 16:13

Yea, going a bit further, it doesn’t really have that unique of an idea. It has Level 0 as a base design, only with a wallpaper change, and then people taking care of animals/entities.
Of course, the Zoo Keepers are interesting, but it isn’t enough to carry the level on it’s own.

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Re: Seeking Greenlight : Level 763

Unity-xk 28 Feb 2022 17:59

Here's a idea maybe give it open field feel to it and maybe give some info on how the Zookeeper take care of the entities and maybe give some third person notes here and there to give it some detail and add a log or a report on incidents or new captured entity, yea the level is a bit colorless in the theme.
Have a good day and hope this benefit you

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