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Love the article! More Null-06 stuff!
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As a space lover, I'm really liking the increase of space stuff.
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The recent increase in space stuff is something I find really great! Considering the vastness of space in the frontrooms it would only make sense to have it in the backrooms. Btw are the clouds of creation an upcoming entity/level?
For what it is, it’s fine, I guess?
Except for the occasional SPaG error?
However, I primarily take issue with the fact that the description relies HEAVILY on Null-06. It doesn’t feel… standalone. It feels like a fragment of Null-06’s page meant to explain its backstory. That’s all Entity 404 is at its current state — a prequel to Null-06’s hypergrowth event. People who didn’t read Null-06 would have zero idea what this page is talking about.
Ultimately, it needs more expansion on its own qualities. The occasional relationship with Null-06 is fine and really helps nail in Null-06 lore, but this page feels like nothing but a tool meant to further another entity’s page.
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Occasional SPaG errors really diminish the overall quality of the article.
It is okay—I guess, but the article itself didn't really spark much interest in me. It is an interesting take on Null-06's lore, that is true, but the way it has been done simply warrants more. It's like the article has an identity crisis and can't interchange between what it is and what it does to Null-06.
This doesn't really warrant an entire entity page for it because it ultimately feels more like a spin off of Null-06's article; it warrants more of itself, entity 404.
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I really like space related stuff article in this website. So I'd probably give it a good rating of course, but overall it's good!
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