Level 628 - "The Island" / Discussion

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yoyoflux 16 Jan 2022 07:08

thisisacoldpostonmostterms.

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s n o w y 16 Jan 2022 07:18

I like it but you should work on not starting a majority of paragraphs with "Level [level number]". Otherwise, I liked it!

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yoyoflux 16 Jan 2022 07:23

i don't do that lol this is an old draft when i update my authorpost that'll make sense.

Aether48 27 Jan 2022 23:15

it took a few years but it's finally out

BiohazardMon 11 Feb 2022 11:30

give the level a name

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Floxk 15 Oct 2022 13:08

sorry,but this article is too long for me XP

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llywrch 01 Jun 2023 17:20

The idea has potential, but this needs rewriting. There is a lack of narrative tension, & at places I was confused about what I was being told.

1:00 am binge-read session

centurys lute 04 Feb 2025 19:15

interesting concept, unfocused execution.

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