Unnumbered Level - "Induced Fear" / Discussion

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Yeesh

Team_Elii 31 Mar 2022 21:20

This is the single most awkward tone I've seen on any article on the site. It feels like you were playing a game of taboo whole writing and weren't allowed to use 100 random words. It sounds like you were trying to encrypt this article using a thesaurus. It feels like this article was written by an AI trained on backrooms articles, but halfway through you ran out of articles and trained it on philosophical video essays instead.

I almost don't want to downvote because I enjoyed reading the article just for the ridiculousness of it, but without the baffling word choice this is just a fairly bog standard enigmatic with no new ideas.

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azurasys 23 Jun 2022 02:12

started out great, then fell flat at the end. i think all this article lacks is a core concept- nothing new is being done here, and by the end it gets very uninteresting and your typical enigmatic level jargon. the start was promising and i really liked it- i expected something to do with the title, "induced fear", and unfortunately i did not get it.
-1'd for now. i'd love to see a rewrite.

RiemannHypothesis 23 Jun 2022 10:37

Completely agree. This was one of my first articles, so the concept wasn't at the top.

(account deleted) 09 Jul 2022 07:36

This article is reallllllly difficult to read for a non-native English speaker(me), and translation work of this article is difficult as well.

Still good article tho.

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正义之子面对有悖常理的世界会让世界天翻地覆。
The right man in a wrong place can make all the difference in the world.

Exit?

Wrongapple 18 Nov 2022 17:42

So is this technically a exit to the backrooms? You said it was a place outside the backrooms, right? If so I guess sometimes exiting the backrooms lead to a worse place than the backrooms itself if this is the case.

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does anyone see these forum signatures, also why does this have more space than the description

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basement12345 10 Feb 2023 12:48

Suffers from a stupendous amount of verbosity, making the article quite difficult to read. The writing is the apex of the articles issues, and my prime problem with it.

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Seems like a bit contradiction

lovetl2003 22 Nov 2023 01:58

as witnesses have reported experiencing severe visual contortions, and perceiving eerie approaching footsteps from outside the buildings.

all tangible objects have an unusual ability to isolate and nullify sound waves, causing an indefinite and prolonged ambience of silence throughout the urban landscape.

+1

Error012 01 Mar 2025 23:16

Love it too much. Unstable structure = unstable mind.