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the being post

yoyoflux 11 Jan 2022 23:48

i'm going through severe mental bad bad's rn tbh.

anyways, welcome back to isle and the thing. you all know 404 lore.

this isn't a series about being satisfied. this is a series about feeling lost. about bad endings.

the setting is non-existent but also is. why? fuck you.

in case you're wondering, i might do a metaphor synopsis after a while, there's many layers to this.

don't get mad when the next part takes 3 years. in the meantime, make sure u read escapism.

ps feel free to downvote objectively speaking this (as well as the next many anticipated pieces) are all on some level objectively bad for numerous reasons.

i love u mxmtoon

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im ceep im weido

yoyoflux 28 Jan 2022 15:34

When you were here before
Couldn't look you in the eye
You're just like an angel
Your skin makes me cry
You float like a feather
In a beautiful world
I wish I was special
You're so fuckin' special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doin' here?
I don't belong here
I don't care if it hurts
I wanna have control
I want a perfect body
I want a perfect soul
I want you to notice
When I'm not around
So fuckin' special
I wish I was special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doin' here?
I don't belong here
She's running out the door (run)
She's running out
She run, run, run, run,
Run…
Whatever makes you happy
Whatever you want
You're so fuckin' special
I wish I was special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doin' here?
I don't belong here
I don't belong here

Re: im ceep im weido

Almarduk 28 Jan 2022 15:35

deepest fucking post ive ever read (im 12)

ratscrapz 12 Jan 2022 00:05

just as i've mentioned to you before, i remember you sending me an earlier version of this and already really liking it; so it's really nice to finally see it finished. :-)

the format is really original but doesn't feel extremely gimmick-y, which is really hard to pull off but makes this piece overall much more of a fun read imo. greenlit this one for a reason, +1!

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yoyoflux 12 Jan 2022 01:50

rat you are the sweetest person ever thank you for the nice words i will cherish them into death.

etoisle 12 Jan 2022 00:14

really beautiful. affecting on par with Like Clockwork. good job.

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do my gay little computers make you mad? do they make you want to hurt me?

yoyoflux 12 Jan 2022 01:52

:) i didn't read like clockwork i just looked at the second part for liek 5 seconds and enjoyed the filmography thing so i kind of started with "how can i format in a way which appears as appealing as that" and ended up expanding a ton.

;-; being considered on par with someone like decibelles is honestly the best compliment i've ever received so i thank you to death.

CementSandwich 12 Jan 2022 23:34

+1 what the fuck

there's nothing negative to say about this, probably my new favorite article onsite. yellow is back at it baybee

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- random bitch on wikidot

yoyoflux 13 Jan 2022 05:20

;-; thank uuuu. i'll release more soon i just need to take a step back to prevent hyperventilation again.

Mister Rustor 25 Jan 2022 15:22

this is really good stuff for an intermission between tales, and it's even cooler that you managed to translate everything that made the Gaius storyline somber but sweet into a God. Damn. Vidya Game Script.

you deserve applause for that, dude. this part really made me tear up:

"Pour a glass, D r i n k
The somber pain away.
Place a brick, then two. Place onto the soot ceramics. And as they
C r u m b l e
And break apart; harmonize with calamity
For a calamity is nothing but a dream we all have. Play your piano. It's something you have."

this fucking line is pure gold. feels like an actual game in acts if you put escapism with it. HOW TF IS THIS SO GOOD AAAAA-
+1 instantly, can't wait to see where the next one takes us, yellow!
Hope this gets made into an actual mega man style game it's sooo worthy of it.

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-ℝ𝕦𝕤𝕥𝕪𝕊𝕡𝕠𝕣𝕜𝕤
𝕋𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕖𝕚𝕣𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕖𝕩𝕚𝕤𝕥𝕤, 𝕀 𝕘𝕦𝕖𝕤𝕤.
☆ﾟ°˖* ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ 𝔸

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yoyoflux 28 Jan 2022 15:41

:) you made me cry myself to sleep (that's a compliment)

i don't know how 2 video game so i can't do that but i wouldn't be closed off to the idea maybe.

cry about it.

CutTheBirch 30 Jan 2022 18:52

long and gay

+1

cry about it.

yoyoflux 31 Jan 2022 19:44

short and not oak

-1

Cosmotheoros 30 Jan 2022 19:52

im gonna pin this it's so long 😭

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Cosmotheoros <3 (Book)

yoyoflux 31 Jan 2022 19:45

i will admit it's a wee lengthy. if it makes you feel better the next part will probably be closer to escapism length then this.

woah um best article to contain a radiohead ref ever i think mayb (+1)

armisael 02 Feb 2022 06:56

this just. i cant say it spoke to me on a personal lvl but i still understood every emotion that played out with how well u were portraying. fucking everything it was so emotional and well formatted and probably the most meaningful article ive read here yet. also liked the callbacks u made to stuff both inside n out of this work its always nice to see references like tht. huge +1 a bit of a dub battle royale

Re: woah um best article to contain a radiohead ref ever i think mayb (+1)

yoyoflux 03 Feb 2022 14:49

woah um best article to contain a radiohead ref ever i think mayb

shitting crying jumping off a cliff.

all jokes aside, i really appreciate the comment. i put a lot into this article, so it's nice to see others enjoy it! thanks!

Re: woah um best article to contain a radiohead ref ever i think mayb (+1)

armisael 04 Feb 2022 03:05

its no prob! it rlly is a beautiful piece of work so ur work is appreciated, ty for writing it!