Hope you enjoy!
This is my first ever level. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
Thanks to HolographicSteel for crit, and a huge thanks to ghostchibi for critting and greenlighting this!
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I like the idea of some bored office worker thinking this will just be another day slowly realize what he's up against. The entity's article edits seem a bit cliché and redundant at times but it was still enjoyable to read.
Thank you everyone for upvoting this! Genuinely didn’t think this’d get so much attention, thank you!
What happens if you kill someone while they crawl inside of ground or coffin?
I had no expectations when going into this article but after I had finished reading it was clear that this level is a masterpiece. The concept, writing, and execution are all fantastic. Honestly one of my favs on the site. +1
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Thank you so much! Sorry for the late response, I haven't been on this site much recently.
interesting concept, flawed execution. you could have chosen any number of ways to showcase the efforts of an ancient entity unaccustomed to editing with technology, and you settled for cliche, faux affable stock phrases.
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