This is the nostalgic genre done right! +1
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Actually sad, this is what's going to happen to our society if we don't adopt socialism
A little too political
Yea lol
Eyy.. i just typed a loada garrbagge
(account deleted)since when did we have communist propaganda on this site
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This level was damn good. Actually portrayed emotion really well and just a good read overall.
I am just worried about 26,000 people. But they seemed to be all dead.
You see… there's nothing really inherently wrong with the page, it's just — like a handful of your other pages — this is simply a bit bland to me. Like yeah there's a point to it and stuff happens but like. It's just a large parking garage with people in it that do things. I'm not that interested in the bleak and bland environments like this. I need something unique and enthralling — something that evokes something strong. All this does for me is make me wonder why I've read through the numerous paragraphs about it, left with nothing to think about at the end.
This is in my top 5 levels on the site. I love every aspect of it and considering the length of the article im surprised at how much fun I had while reading it, I became invested in the story going on here and I wanna read it over and over so I really get to capture every little detail.
Easy +1
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aside from the whole "parking lot boring" thing, this page is actually pretty good! i love it when a page has a bunch of details. keep it up!!
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the concept has potential, but the execution is bland and uninteresting. it's hard to evoke emotions from readers with numbers.
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