This article honestly would have been completely fine if you didn't include the whole idea of the Doctors group within the level. While there's nothing really invigorating about the other content of the article, it's entertaining enough to read through, since it's a solid piece of work. There are quite a bit of SPaG errors, but it's not so distracting it makes reading an unpleasant experience. However, the vague teaser at the beginning of the article changes all that.
When I saw that first quote, I went into the rest of the article expecting a great revelation. I expected the content of the article to be the setup to drop the bombshell of a new GOI, the Doctors, who could test the waters in unique and interesting ways. I perused the first few paragraphs expecting the Doctors to come in and have it all click into place. However, I kept waiting. And I kept waiting. And I kept waiting. Then I went through the detailed tab about all the different areas, and I waited some more. And finally, and the end of the article, all I got was a few bullet points. It was immensely disappointing.
The other content of the article can stand on its own. I like the details, and it’s clear you put a good amount of thought and effort into the design of this level. However, when you tease at something in the beginning, leaving the reader in suspense for the entire article, just for them to find out that the whole Doctors group is barely anything of importance, it makes the entire article feel like fluff and filler. It’s like you promised us that everything was written with a purpose, leading up to a climax, only to reveal at the end that none of this ever meant anything and was just written to be a mundane document of an area with no story or personality. It leaves a bitter taste in the reader’s mouth. This level isn’t exactly horrible by any means, but if I was shown this in its current state, I wouldn’t greenlight it. If the Doctors were cut out entirely, or expanded upon in a meaningful way that also ties in with the many meticulous details about this level, then the level would improve greatly in my eyes, but right now even the most precise of details here ring hollow and empty for me.