Hello, dear reader! I hope you've enjoyed this article.
I absolutely lost it when they talked about Level 3. +1
Made me cackle
Glad I got early access to this in the crit phase
+1
The virgin M.E.G. VS the chad TSoMLGCaHB.
Obviously TSoMLGCaHB
the meg are like 5 times bigger with more stuff,info and bases
survior
BUT THEIR CHADS
I'm justice!…What?…No not the blind folded girl!
The prose in this is decent and the log at the end was at least somewhat entertaining; but to me, that didn't make up for how grating the excessive reddit-y internet humor was. While there was potential to make the descriptions of the boys and their antics the comedic payload of this article, it seemed instead to rely on nonstop meme-culture references as a comedic crutch — and the article was much, much weaker for it.
Sorry you didn't like it!
I feel that 'Reddit humor' was appropriate for this page… as a literal Gamer Chad society, I’m not sure what else you expected tbh LOL. Just seems like a matter of personal taste, and I can respect that ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I do agree that I could’ve expanded a bit more on the description of each member. I considered adding a table to describe each member separately, but I suppose I didn’t because I thought it would be a bit repetitive. I did try to make the antics the article’s focus - that’s kind of the point of the logs. I’m interested to hear how you might have done it differently!
Thanks for the feedback!
Holy crap, this is one of the funniest joke entries I've ever read; I could not stop laughing. Huge +1
They remind me of one of those Tiktok boyz
Cosmotheoros <3 (Book)
LOOK AT HIM GO, HE’S SUCTION CUP MAN had me crying, mostly with memories.
I really like this article, I do want to see more stories of their gaming-
~🌱
imagine living a normal day in level 11 then you see a guy climbing a building like he's king kong and yelling "I'M THE SUCTION CUP MAN"
THATS WHAT IM SAYIN