+1, but some comments
I still feel as if the entry is relatively underwhelming. It's much better than it was previously, but I feel like there's more you could've done. The whole "changing terrain" thing has been done before, along with the article itself not having much pay off. You kinda slowly hint at this cool thing in the beginning, only for it to end with "alright the level changed, here's another file revision." Like there just could've been a lot more done there in my opinion. Feels like a huge missed opportunity. I'm upvoting this only because the writing and stuff is actually not too bad, it was pretty hesitant though, as I feel like you could've done more, and made it slightly less underwhelming.