I absolutely love the concept! My only issue is that it sounds very similar to the party goers, but limited to one level. I feel these similarities won't allow it to stand out. Nice touch with l33t speak. I will warn that I couldn't read the bottom portion, but I just have a problem with eyesight.
Very sorry you couldn’t read it. Here is an easy-reader version.
Finally, cracked the leet. Ugh… this is hard. Okay, look, if you can read this. My name is ▋▋▋▋▋. I got caught and coded… but for some reason, my mind is intact. Read this stuff carefully, this is important. There's a computer. A special one. From what I've seen, it can access ANY non secret level in the backrooms. The coders type something in, a portal opens, boom. But these guys are idiots. They reach in and grab computer junk, then they close the portal. I have no idea why they won't just go through to invade… if they're trying to take over, seems like that would be a better way to do it. They can also use the computer to like, create Levels or something. I dunno, I think I saw them do it. Anyway, they've got control over a few Levels with that PC, they like to toy with the people stuck inside. If you ever wanna stop these guys for real, maybe try grabbing that computer. I dunno if it'll work, but maybe there's a way to reverse the coding process and cure them. And cure ME, specifically. Please?
While I like the writing the concept is just WAY too similar to the partygoers. Unfortunatly I'm downvoting this as a result.
I mean, partygoers, you can tell how those are obviously partygoers, but the coders have a more complex idea with it literally seeming like a normal friendly MEG entity.
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Near the bottom of the biology collapsible, it still mentions "Level ▋▋▋" instead of "Level 400," which I am assuming it should be.
It could be that the coder’s try to change anything and everything about Level 400 to make it seem friendly
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It is a very interesting concept and I personally like it, my only issue is that I think this article would have been better if the coders were good guys (for once a good entity in the backrooms that is not extinct).
doesn't distinguish itself from the cliche of partygoer-type entities.
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